again ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, you present us great topic
you have useful hoppies
in my leisure ,,,, I like reading ,
and I like writing poetry (( but in some cases acording to my psychological situation ))) and injoy
reading the folk poetry
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about your essay.............
you are right
and i want to add some thing else,,,,,,,,, the parents should understand their sons and be close to them
COZ if the teens be alone they will look for any one to help , and to listen to them , to trust in,,,,,,,
and this may guide them to bad company
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